From dancing to the tune of my dreams,
To day dreaming in those sensations.
Prioritizing it over all,
Oh god! Was that fortuitous entry indispensable?
Losing my brain like nut-bolts,
And reprioritizing my sensibilities.
Priorities had lost it’s own track,
Creating a twin track.
Placing the interim affection above all,
A sly, manipulative him mania I had.
Not knowing where this would conclude,
Cause he was a smoker and I was not his cigarette.
This disintegration was the final call,
For getting my priorities on virtuous path.
Lovely… priorities do matter…
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I’m glad that you agree to it and like!!
Thank you for stopping it and reading
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Reblogged this on aakashhiran and commented:
A very true thing !!
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@aakashhiran thank you so so much. I am glad that you believe in it!! π
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Great poem π Twin track of Priorities and He, the smoker and You, not his cigarette (clap) Awesome and thought provoking π
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Thank you for stopping by and appreciating!!
Glad to know you found it thought provoking!! π
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Yes, loved the idea and concept π Got something to think upon π
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Glad to know that, Aap ka dhanyawaad!! π
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Welcome ka hindi nahi ata mujhe π I m bad at Hindi π and when I say Bad, make it THE WORST π
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Haha. I guess and I’m sure you are from India. Hindi toh aane chaiye na?! π
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Haan India se hi π School me Hindi tha π But, I seldom watch hindi movies or listen hindi songs and hence the lack in vocabulary but baat karna ata hau hindi me π
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Haha. Mai bhi all that Pro nahi hu Hindi mein. Par chalta hai. U see!! π
It’s like just trying to get the hang of it too!!
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Yes same π ab agar koi bolega ki padho and likho, to ayega but upar upar se π bahut spelling mistakes hogi π which place do you belong to? India pukka.. Then π
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I belong to India!! Specifically Maharashtra!! π
That happens when you stop writing and reading too much of Hindi!!
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Maharashtra good π Koi Hindi b nahi padhta.. Bas baat chit in Hindi π you write everyday ya jab b mann karta hai tab? π
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Jab bhi mann kare tab!! Lately I’m keeping busy to give that needed time for writing!!
U write often I suppose, as per my readers page!! π
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Thank God your reader is working fine π mine isn’t working good and I m missing many beautiful work of many friends π¦ yeah, lately I am trying to write daily something π but, some days I also don’t get time & some days I am also blank π but, you got the talent Vishakha so hone your skills π
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Mine works perfectly good for reading!! That hunger for reading is still alive!! π
I’ll surely try posting my work till November as much as possible!! After November, I’ll surely horn up and speed up on my work!!
Thanks for appreciating and finding that piece of talent in me!! π π
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Yes good π reading hunger is the best and what we have to low down the hunger is more good π November tak kya hai? Good then waiting for November to come asap π
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You will get to know as time passes!! π π
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Ok π Good day Girl π
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